[Action] The Great March Finished

aduck1 CA

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Jul 20th 2011, 11:20 : 0/0
Due to the inablitity for this post to hold more than three chapters, the next three shall appear in my next post. I am sorry for the incovience.

Prologue:

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Chapter 1: Discovery

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Chapter 2 part 1: Losses


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Chapter 2 part 2: Killing to Protect

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Chapter 3: Superhuman

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Authors Notes Chapter's 1-3
RustyGateWay CA

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Jul 20th 2011, 13:25 : 0/0
That was pretty good! I'll follow this thread whenever I have time. Even if I don't post, consider me a lurker.
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Jul 20th 2011, 14:25 : 0/0
Rather enjoyed it, keep it up
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Jul 20th 2011, 16:04 : 0/0
Good background history as well as first chapter
Now post more quickly cause I'm hooked
How were no protoss found inside the Aribiter? where did the pilots go
Do the humans know that the deep space probe was found by the protoss?
aduck1 CA

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Jul 21st 2011, 04:50 : 0/0
Yay, three people like it alredy. Next part up.

@sinclairlkl: All will be revealed in good time.
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Jul 21st 2011, 09:42 : 0/0
aduck1 CA

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Jul 22nd 2011, 11:55 : 0/0
Second part of chapter 2 is up. Dang that was hard and long to type.
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Jul 22nd 2011, 13:00 : 0/0
Is this the end?
aduck1 CA

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Jul 22nd 2011, 13:24 : 0/0
Not a chance, just wait.
aduck1 CA

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Jul 23rd 2011, 16:27 : 0/0
Chapter 3 is up, with more author notes. Enjoy! (Man, typing one segment a day is hard. Now I understand Uberlisk.)
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Jul 25th 2011, 03:07 : 0/0
Will the story be continuing through his PoV? ;D Great story btw
RustyGateWay CA

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Jul 25th 2011, 03:55 : 0/0
that's...a lot of writing. I loved chapter 3 and the authors notes. Chapter 2 was ok.
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Jul 25th 2011, 05:07 : 0/0
I've always viewed fan-fictions as contradictory, boring, non-applicable, and nerdy.

However, after reading your prologue alone, I found it very interesting (coming from a guy who doesn't find joy in reading).

Keep it up
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Jul 25th 2011, 13:00 : 0/0
@xmaine: Yay, a new reader. I have been thinking about this fan-fic for a while, and I have the general storyline written out in my head. The prologue also chronicles some of my fears, I see a third world war breaking out in my lifetime due to overpopulation and lack of resources.

Here are the next chapters:

Chapter 4: Alive

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Chapter 5: The Ark Protocol

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Chapter 6: Traitor

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Chapter 7: Witness and Record

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Author's Notes, chapters 4-6:
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Jul 25th 2011, 13:15 : 0/0
good chapter. I like how Anasazi thinks the humans are so ****ty XD go banelings go!