[Nvidia] HotS: Race against time (Finished)

chaklong HK

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Sep 5th 2010, 06:02 : 0/0
HOLY CRAP!!!!

THIS

IS

AMAZING!

THIS SHOULD BE THE ACTUAL STORY!!!!!!!!


WIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

EPIC!!!!!!!1

INSANE!!!!!!!!
Kerplode DE

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Sep 5th 2010, 11:11 : 0/0
My one problem with this story: Kerrigan is a good-guy and her Zerg team with the humans. I just can't get over how much I'd hate that to happen.

Overall, it's awesome, I can clearly see why you won.

shadedclan

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Sep 9th 2010, 18:34 : 0/0
Very nice story. Well put. I had fun reading it. Though it is sad Jim died. Hopefully that wouldn't really happen. I also like the twists you added in here. But the Apollo, I imagined that Kerrigan would stay on a zerg vessel or something. It's still nice, though.
timmayg

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Sep 13th 2010, 12:48 : 0/0
It's a trap!

) ***** you hilarious!

anyways, congratzzles on the win, dude. hope you put the prize to GOOD GODDAMN USE.
KaleDavid

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Sep 22nd 2010, 12:46 : 0/0
Awesome story, I really enjoyed reading it. The only reason I'd want them to not use it would be because I don't want to know the ending already! It's sad that Raynor died, but you made him die in a meaningful way and I liked that. Maybe in the game a less important character could push Kerrigan out of the way from Narud's shot. Maybe Stetman or Horner? That way we'd still have our poster boy. =P Granted, having Raynor sacrifice himself makes it much more emotional and that much better of a game!
averyfatcow US

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Sep 22nd 2010, 13:40 : 0/0
Great story! I can't believe I didn't read this sooner!

I would comment more, but don't want to spoil it for others