[Nvidia] HotS: Race against time (Finished)

XFoXBoRX PE

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Aug 14th 2010, 11:16 : 0/0
StarCraft 2: Hearth of the Swarm by FoXBoR (XFoXBoRX)

Before starting, I am a Spanish speaker so my English is not pretty good, but I am going to make an effort. So let’s go!

Resume of WoL:

Intro Cinematic:

Intro to HotS:


Main character of History:


Base of Operations:


Currency/Upgrade/Research/Special Unit system:


Missions:
Missions are chosen the same way as WoL’s: They will be present at the Control Room on a star map. We have 12 Main missions, with 9 side missions, 4 special missions and 1 secret mission. You can go straight the 12 main missions and win the game, but if you want more action you can go through the side missions, unlocking many units and learning more about the story.
Some Mission’s offer you Mutagenic Compounds as a reward to use them for your upgrades. Also some of them have several Dominion or UED archives split on the map in order to recover them for your research. So here is the Story:

Main Mission 1:

Main Mission 2:

Main Mission 3:

Main Mission 4:

4-5 Cinematic:

Main Mission 5:

Main Mission 6:

Main Mission 7:

Main Mission 8:

8-9 Cinematic:

Main Mission 9:

9-10 Cinematic:

Main Mission 10:

10-11 Cinematic:

Main Mission 11:

Main Mission 12:

Final Cinematic:

Conclussions:

About Side Missions, Special Missions and Secret Missions:


- 14/08: Posted, updated little by little.
- 15/08: Mercs added. Many grammar changes done.
- 16/08: Added some details on the Intro (at the last part). Some grammar changes done.
- 18/08: Added Main Missions 1,2. Corrected: Kerrigan used Queens to control the Swarm. (Not Cerebrates)
- 19/08: Added an Intro Cinematic and Mission 3: Here I present the new base of operations: The Apollo. Fixed grammar and edited Intro to HotS and Main Mission 2.
- 21/08: Added Mission 4. Edited some parts (little).
- 22/08: Added Mission 5, 6, 7 and 8.
- 23/08: Added 8-9 Cinematic. Heavily edited Mission 7. Also edited Mission 8.
- 24/08: Added Mission 9, 9-10 Cinematic and Mission 10.
- 25/08: Added Cinematic 10-11, Final Cinematic and Mission 11 and 12. Fixed some grammar. FINISHED.
XFoXBoRX PE

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Aug 25th 2010, 19:23 : 0/0
I just finished the story. Sorry for the Double Post.
MEDAVAS US

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Aug 25th 2010, 20:23 : 0/0
WOW! Kudos for all this work! Personally, I don't have the patience to read all of this right now. I scanned through it and it looks amazing though. Very nice and good luck with the contest. Nice conclusions, but I don't like that Raynor died..
Jultra US

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Aug 25th 2010, 20:37 : 0/0
just awesome man, really great details. i loved it all, even tho it was sad i can imagine that raynor dying sequence really happening. one question, i thought when they relieved stukov of his infestation he died then..? i could be wrong but thats only flag that popped up in my mind when reading.

great work!!
XFoXBoRX PE

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Aug 25th 2010, 21:16 : 0/0
on 25/8/10Quote by Jultra
just awesome man, really great details. i loved it all, even tho it was sad i can imagine that raynor dying sequence really happening. one question, i thought when they relieved stukov of his infestation he died then..? i could be wrong but thats only flag that popped up in my mind when reading.


I didn't consider canon "Deception" (the mission where Raynor de-infest Stukov).
Actually Vladimir Stukov is not Alexei Stukov (from BroodWar). Vladimir Stukov is a character that I have created. He is like his younger brother that remained on the Earth. Later, he asumed the place of Admiral.

on 25/8/10Quote by MEDAVAS
WOW! Kudos for all this work! Personally, I don't have the patience to read all of this right now. I scanned through it and it looks amazing though. Very nice and good luck with the contest. Nice conclusions, but I don't like that Raynor died..


Hey don't be pesimist : D. Maybe Raynor is not 100% dead, maybe he can appear in LotV, like Tassadar did on WoL. Everything can happen in Starcraft Universe : ).
Auto US

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Aug 25th 2010, 21:18 : 0/0
on 25/8/10Quote by Jultra
just awesome man, really great details. i loved it all, even tho it was sad i can imagine that raynor dying sequence really happening. one question, i thought when they relieved stukov of his infestation he died then..? i could be wrong but thats only flag that popped up in my mind when reading.

great work!!


Alexei Stukov is still alive. Even though he came back to life by being infested, but he didn't need to stay infested in order for him to continue living.

Great Story, but I don't know about Raynor dying. Blizzard would have to find a new poster boy if that were to happen.
AlecBell

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Aug 26th 2010, 01:33 : 0/0
dude, awesome skills! yeah, i don't think compared to you guys i have a chance of winning.....especially since i don't yet have wings of liberty yet =( (one of the downsides of being in china). seriously though, i think you have a very good chance of winning with all the detail you have. good luck man!
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Aug 26th 2010, 02:20 : 0/0
pretty good! but Raynor dying? doubt that..many of the main characters in Blizzards world dont really die (unless its so epic, theres a plot to it and why ) and Zertaul KNOWS that Kerrigan needs to be saved not killed XD (the beginning part made me raised an eyebrow but its pretty good XD)
The_Dark_One BG

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Aug 26th 2010, 04:30 : 0/0
Great story! I wish you luck in the tournament.
XFoXBoRX PE

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Aug 26th 2010, 19:07 : 0/0
Thank you everyone for the support!
Naughtius SE

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Sep 1st 2010, 23:33 : 0/0
Very good story!
HandleBar CA

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Sep 1st 2010, 23:58 : 0/0
Very nice!! No wonder you won.
Kaleva

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Sep 2nd 2010, 04:27 : 0/0
Congratulations for a good story, and for the winning
prolink007 US

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Sep 2nd 2010, 09:41 : 0/0
wow, just read. This is actually really good.
Congrats
ngilford US

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Sep 2nd 2010, 10:07 : 0/0
iMuy Bien! iNo puedo escribir un cuento ese bien! Lo siento if I botched you language, for you sure didn't botch mine! Great job!